15.12.09

more portfolio re-do's






Posted by mooresy @ 5:04 PM

4 comments:

Unknown said...

i'm feelin' it all...except the chicago project comes a little out of left field.

i don't think the image is about the site, it's about the ice/refraction, melting whatevs.

i would say make the background more simple (maybe a line drawing) with no color, or with some greys. the blue seems to be too much. too specific.

December 15, 2009 at 5:41 PM
Unknown said...

I REALLY like the NCIED re-do with the site involved.

I am wondering if there is a way to include the site on the train station project? The cool thing about your design is that it is navigating down the site condition in a really unique way. In the render, you can't tell that is doing this. Maybe you could add the buildings in the background and the train tracks even as line drawings. It looks like the people in the waiting area to the right side are in some kind of un-space.

this is va.

December 15, 2009 at 5:52 PM
Joshua said...

yeah i see your chicago image being more of a preliminary idea montage and not a money shot that stands by itself. The other three are "completed" project images that have more tactility to it. Also, maybe just try the background in a grey scale to make the cyan pop or you could try another neutral tone like navy or sienna. Did you "finish" chicago in the same way as the train station or are you showing it as more of a concept and process piece?

December 16, 2009 at 10:23 AM
mooresy said...

Thanks y'all!
Chicago will always be a concept/process...

December 17, 2009 at 1:18 PM

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