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I see what your saying, showing, etc... but I need more info. The delineation between existing buildings and yours isn't obvious right away; darken that grey or just make them black. (Also, can't figure out what the "other parts" are)Post a section and I'll help more. So glad you got this, keep going!
thx <3. ps i'm afraid of black
yeah, it's too subtle. and where are the ramps exactly? i can't tell.
siii im trying to follow the ramps up to it.. i like their form. an overly-complicated ramp to a simple structure would be fun¡
what about an overly-complicated ramp to an overly-complicated structure (as in ncied)?
SCALE SCALE I'M LOST. look at some roof plans/landscaping projez in that el croq, need more surface detail.
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I see what your saying, showing, etc... but I need more info. The delineation between existing buildings and yours isn't obvious right away; darken that grey or just make them black. (Also, can't figure out what the "other parts" are)
Post a section and I'll help more.
So glad you got this, keep going!
thx <3. ps i'm afraid of black
yeah, it's too subtle. and where are the ramps exactly? i can't tell.
siii im trying to follow the ramps up to it.. i like their form. an overly-complicated ramp to a simple structure would be fun¡
what about an overly-complicated ramp to an overly-complicated structure (as in ncied)?
SCALE SCALE I'M LOST. look at some roof plans/landscaping projez in that el croq, need more surface detail.
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