I was just informed by my sister, that the bike didn't look right bc the handle bars are contemporary. Vintage bikes have upright handle bars. Thank god! I couldn't figure out what was wrong with it myself.
duh. vintage handles all the way. it looks like the bike is pulling the tracery around the page. maybe connect it more...like having the tracery become the chains on the bike.
I was going to interconnect it more with the tracery that's left to draw, but I never thought of making it a literal connection. I'm going to work on that. The printers are still waiting on the paper, so I have a little extra time.
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this is turning out way more classy and way less kitschy than i thought it would...
I was just informed by my sister, that the bike didn't look right bc the handle bars are contemporary. Vintage bikes have upright handle bars. Thank god! I couldn't figure out what was wrong with it myself.
duh. vintage handles all the way. it looks like the bike is pulling the tracery around the page. maybe connect it more...like having the tracery become the chains on the bike.
and to reiterate what dylan said: classy.
I was going to interconnect it more with the tracery that's left to draw, but I never thought of making it a literal connection. I'm going to work on that. The printers are still waiting on the paper, so I have a little extra time.
thanks Kaitlyn!
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